Treatment Feedback

In class we discussed the main parts of our Opening Sequence Treatment Plan with the rest of our class. The class were asked to write something positive, a question and something to improve on.

Positive feedback we got was that our plot was well thought, detailed and all the topics were covered, and that crucially our idea was interesting and intriguing. One particular positive comment was the acknowledgement of our title 'This Life Ain't Fair' which the person thought was well thought out and fitted the themes and genre of our film.

The majority of our questions were based on how will we get hold of a studio which a main part of our opening sequence will be filmed. The answer to these questions is that Oscar his own studio which we are able to use. Another question was how we will get our moving shots to be smooth. The answer to this is that we will record this shots a number of times so we are able to choose the best option and as we are filming to try and find ways to make the movement of the camera as smooth as possible.

Some points in which we could improve on were making sure we really make the storyline and characters clear even though our opening sequence will be Non-Linear. And to make we have asked permission from record labels and owners for any pieces of music we want to use.

Overall the class feedback was important and will help us improve our opening sequence not only from our specific feedback but also from listening to other group's ideas.